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by Baron Waste

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Aunty MuseAunty Museover 18 years ago
Well written

Well written, but more of a letter than a poem.

Did you consider "weigh" instead of "weight"?

Keep writing.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Short as it is, this still seems a bit wordy prose piece; need to pare it down.

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Want to be...

A person who desires to just be ~ a friend.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
TRYING TO HELP OTHERS

when the self is needed most. TK U MLJ LV NV

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