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by Eden_Apple

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
KEEPING THEM CLOSE

and in order, TK U MLJ LV NV

Suite21menSuite21menover 12 years ago
Great Imagery

But I think the rhymes got in the way. Poems don't have to rhyme. They just need to provoke enticing visions.

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