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if you can get past the poor un-natural poetic rendering of the lines in an attempt to make rhyme and rhythm. The poem is set out in the index to be about a mating of a man and a she-male but in actuality it is a man receiving anal from a woman with a taped strap-on (most rubber dicks are harnessed). The poem describes this ball slapping experience and then suggests a new "playing field" will be opened, i.e. the man will consort with a she-male. I enjoyed the theme but more effort is needed to pull this together and perhaps a second poem to describe the next event. It would appear that since male/female coitus is so mundane we need a variant to induce excitement in what appears to be a disguised wish for a gay penetration, more acceptably performed by one who has both breasts and a penis.

Dear Anon

you are on the right track. have taken note of your constructive critic. A second poem will be on its way in due course.

On the point that there may be a wish for a gay liaison...definitely not. Simply an experience of another sort. An adventure new. Ones preferences as to male or female are not being questioned or challenged. Some of us simply enjoy variation without much analysis.

The best of all worlds...should one be judged or boxed into a category for daring to dabble in what society may not be able to explain away?

RB.