All Comments on 'Between Flights'

by Remec

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasurealmost 11 years ago
Some nice images....

....but I found it too like prose broken into lines. Not one of your best imo. Voted anyway.

todski28todski28almost 11 years ago
Love this piece

A nice little snippet of a casual fling

I especially liked the images present in

pieces of her uniform and his piled

side-by-side, never mingling, very

much the way their bodies would

soon be piled together but still mostly

just doing their own thing

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