All Comments on 'Betwixt'

I like the way "The kissing fire of leather strands The clicking tock of a clock's two hands" sounds.

I agree.

"The kissing fire of leather strands"

is a good line.

Simply put, I like this start to finish. Thank you.

~Merry

where and who has the redemption, TK U MLJ LV NV

Can't decide which line I love better: "the kissing fire of leather strands" or "as heated stripes line rows on rows" Holy crap, way to show & not tell!!!