All Comments on 'Biding Time'

...to be a theme today. Is it that the winter makes us think of our mortality? This poem struck me as a little lack-lustre - I'm not sure why, but it didn't grab me the way it wanted to.

(remember GWRH that this is opinion only)

Hey there Godess, hope things are lookin' up.

One suggestion, lose (or greatly reduce) the punctuation. Unless it is really necessary it really breaks up the flow of the poem by making the reader pause when they should be swimming along your river of words endlessly towards something I am not sure what.....lol You have a lot of beautiful lines in here that belong together, not separated by a cold, unfeeling slash dash dot ick

What quality life

If it's spent awaiting death?

Life is like a vapor ~ soon it vanishes into thin air and is no more.

very boring existence and long days and nights TK U MJ LV NV

for thats what I AM, TK U MLJ LV NV