by iqespresso
This poem was mentioned in the New Poems Review in the Poetry Forum.
You seem to be having lots of fun in this poem! My favourite line is, "Foreplay-foreplay forte-forte." Keep playing with sounds -- you do it well. But you could pare a few lines to streamline the rhythm.
Entertaining, bouncy and visually stimulating. Lovingly told and laughingly bold.
There might be more to this poet than meets the clit. I notice and maybe this wasn't IQ's intent, he starts of in a strong measure but rhythm as it reaches the end of his big clit girls weakens, like he is totally awesomely worn out. Us big clit girls need more of your poems IQ but get your rest, you need your strength.
We have to study this stuff 'erotic poetry' and hot, like totally hot... and I like your Ivy League stuff. Brown University next year...
You are so funny, sensual, erotic and exotic. And I bet that you are a sexy middle aged man. Yours in Vashon Island