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with mud and dirty water on it, TK U MLJ LV NV

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.

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Wearing a hat on a windy day ~ an exercise in caution.

SJ may have got it right

But not everything austere feels right;

Sometimes the pleasure's in the frills

A little added sensual thrill.

Ignore him, sweetie. He can give good advice at times, but it's always wrapped in thorns. In this particular case it's not even good advice.

- Mindy

big hats on a windy day

fall into the puddles

(and no more)

Yes...haven't we all been caught some time, being big pretty hats, fluttering about in the wind, heading for that puddle? I know I have.

sweet, well written, poetic, just everything about it is so nice.

....second fine offering from this new poet today. A very good read!