All Comments on 'Big Spoon, Little Spoon'

A certain twist to bedtime cutlery. And it seems there's not just one way to do a relaxing embrace.

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Thank you for introducing me to these threads!

And, for giving me “the mention”!

I like the simplicity of this poem. And that is meant as a compliment. Writing is all about creating a mood for the reader to step into and you did that here. The submissive mindset is a place where one can find themselves in a blur and at a loss for words as they enjoy pleasure. Also the adoration comes through clearly. Well done.

Thank you, Giada!

I find the male submissive's absolute trust in the domme very appealing. Definitely five stars!

@RiverMaya. Thank you! And yes, the absolute trust is an essential element in achieving the emotional “completeness”.

A very interesting twist

@JasmineGreen. Thank you!

Makes you feel that feeling...what poetry is all about I guess.

@cleevedreams. Thank you!

Nicely done, better to be spooned than forked.

Oh! Bliss.

Loved this! Nice tempo that gives a meaning to the carefully chosen words.5 from me!

That her sex took him over , he was domin8ed and he loved it.

anutha 5'er

Brings back memories...

Such a beautiful poem.

It's hot as anything - the emotions and the desires come through loud and clear!

I enjoyed this even though I'm not really much into female domination. It makes me understand it a bit. Thank you.

I love that it’s all and only suggested.

A beautiful and sensuous description, and elegantly written.

Elegant

What I like is the loving invitation to take control and do what I want...

Very sensually presented

Damp Kitten; This poem was a reflection on a very special relationship. Thank you for appreciating the power shift and the resultant sensuality. It was a very intimate journey that was energizing and stimulated sexual creativity.