All Comments on 'Bird Heaven'

was mentioned in the New Poems Review!

I like quirky poems

I enjoyed reading your poem. Your poem has a good rythmn and your language is honest and emotional, helps set the scene for the reader.

"it wasn't really

dead

it was dying"

it is amazing to me, how a simple switch like this, taking the bird from dead to dying makes such an impct-- think of what the poem would have been if you would have started it with the bird dying.... you have good instincts.

Now here's a piece from just a few months back

An odd little piece

You may want to spread your wings

And just for the joy of it, take flight.

A poet wonders about a dying bird ~ and bird heaven on a hot day.

doesnt allow for safety, TK U MLJ LV NV