All Comments on 'Birthday Blues'

by JasperMan

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
PUTTING THE CHORDS

and the beat-blues go on. TK U MLJ LV NV

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Enter...

A robust entry into the world ~ a child who arrived with the idea of full speed ahead.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Lyrics don't really work all that well as poetry, especially when it's as obvious as this. The only thing worse is highly abstract prose poetry.

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