Bite

try to finish every meal. TK U MLJ LV NV

Pretty amazing response to your very hot poem. Seems you've touched some very sensitive spot in some people with some rather twisted issues. Whatever. Your poem rocks.

lol, BD

meaty bits

of prosey

fuckwords

make salivary glands

flow like a

wide open faucet

oh hell yes.

RF I understand the passion you are trying to hit here with the poem. It has potential and I can feel heat smoldering beneath the words. I am sorry I was not around to help you on one of the FLUFFY useless writers threads that I share on. It does need work and I think you have the emotional makings of a hot erotic poem here. I am going to take it to Chasin Chickens and play with it for you if you do not mind. I hope to let all know that we are serious there just like to laugh also. Art and I IM alot when we work on poems and I would gladly do that with you if you like. Let me know

du~

another grammar police, lauren in disguise? Sounds like her, dont fret the nazi comments, obviously this person has a deep hurt or pain and lost soul and needs something to soothe the soul, like hatred for those that write well and recieve praise? I enjoy your poems RF and so do others, seems some don't like the recognition you have recieved.

Your poem was HOT, HEHEHE Erotic which is what this site is geared for and you do it very well <grin> please continue

(LeBroz, You absolutley shake my tree ,and i love it ! )and to add a little something more to this .. if this comment section keeps up, this will be the new hottest poem on lit, lol........ what a damn bite that is .. there would be the cat that ate the canary.. LMAO... and i am sure there is more to cum.

with all my peaches,

*grins*

Y.U.M.M.Y !

now, with that being said, may i let you know, with my lower case i's , mind you, that i rather enjoy your poetry, and the bite, i get ... pun intended. no one person writes the same, if we did, the world would crash and burn into hell just from being merely board to death.

now, go eat a peach ..lol... *winks*

What makes you think I'm a she, Jennifer C? It doesn't matter either way, my comments would serve RhymeFairy's poetry better and that's why she has public comments open for, now isn't it?

I'm sorry RhymeFairy, please delete this comment as soon as you see it because it isn't in your poem's best interest and I really do care enough to see you ascend in your poetry skill level.

She's even picking my pc's apart now, you'd think she'd have better things to do! I may be a 'fluff' poet but i'm still qualified to say whether or not I like a poem and I liked the poem.

So If you wanna improve your writing RF stay away from us 'fluff poets and our threads' and participate in the threads 'J Doe' sez you should! Apparently she knows it all.

Way to go Jenn ~

Stepped away from my prayers at your altar to render some devotions to your lil smutty buddy ~

Hey RF, ya done good here, like Jenn said;

and as for your anonymous "M" ~ get "religion" <grin>

getting wrapped like a pretzel;

now that's a woman who KNOWS what she wants

another thought - don't do it because it's been "done before?" For those that believe that - quit breathing - it's been done before