All Comments on 'Black and Blue'

by jessiebluegirl

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DesejoDesejoover 11 years ago
Wow...

This is something different! Interesting use of language, and you have created a frenetic feeling - feels almost like neon light flickering on and off on scenes that are almost, but not entirely, disjointed. I'm not entirely sure what is going on with Mommy (don't tell me, I'm ok with that). Strong and intense -well done.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
VERY DYSFUNCTIONAL

to say the least, Does hiding make it not, TK U MLJ LV NV

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