All Comments on 'Black Journal'

nice ideas..I'd love to see it expanded a little and put into stanzas. I think it would have more impact.

Thank you for sharing

The potential for much pain exploration

Carefully crafted could have huge impact.

It stuck like glue deep inside my heart

It stuck like glue deep inside my heart

A classic from this wordsmith's mind that blesses all of us with it's heartbreaking, yet tender rendering. There is an ethereal beauty to this poetic gem. Enjoyable!