All Comments on 'Blackbird’s A’ Comin’'

thanks for the read.

This seems to me to be more in the nature of words for a song than a poem for reading. If it is a song, you might mention that as a footnote. It would alter how I approach this work.

is the ultimate poetry <grin... a very good poem

This left me with a low, buzzing feeling in my belly... yummy! Like I should be sitting on a front porch, listening to an old man blowing a harp and singing this ole blues tune. It feels timeless, like something calling me home.

nice beat,i like it, sandspike

Nice edit

Explains the feel of the beat implicit here.

flock together in trees apart, TK U MLJ LV NV