All Comments on 'Blank Me'

by Toward A Word

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Great rhymes!

Urgent meter and a fuck-me rhythm. I like it!

DustystarDustystaralmost 20 years ago
Oh Really?

suck me

fuck me

I'll be your bronco

ride and buck me

Yee-haw, cowboy! This wild west girl like a purty rhyme mighty fine.

Wow, Toward, good stuff.

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
You...

...have to love this....the rhythm and rhyme felt like sex while reading -- two fine and dandy endeavors at once.

SinsualmindSinsualmindalmost 20 years ago
diggin' this

"cream me

scream me

close your eyes

relax and dream me"

I loved the rythm in this. Enjoyed reading :)

light

R~~~

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A FINAL WORD

please dont leave. TK U MLJ LV NV

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