Blaze

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Submission to my lover. BDSM. Spanking.
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DampKitten
DampKitten
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My lover's gaze is blazing sun
as down abandoned beach I run
in search of shade,
of shrouded sky --
I shan't escape his searing eye.

Alas, the faster that I try
to flee the warmth of his embrace
the further still I'm lost until
my heart surrenders to the chase.

My lips surrender to the taste
of sweet submission's knotted twine
around my wrists and ankles laced
across his bed -- then from behind

I feel his strength, his solemn hand,
the thundered crash of reprimand
against my cheek, across my sex.
And as he swings, my muscles flex

a tightly dimpled glowing ass
that flinches with his every pass.
His fiery fingers singe my mound
and melt my cotton candied down

till dripping syrup soaks the sheets.
Resistance fails, restraint retreats.
His tongue against my throbbing pearl
has lashed my gash
has dipped and swirled.

While pink ambrosia fills the air,
my essence gushes everywhere!
Then standing tall, this gallant steed
impales my well of aching need.

Relentless Thrusts -- Euphoric Pain
My core is pouring out his name!
Drained and sated, love's lament
hath soothed the fire of discontent.

I weep where weeping's wants are learned
and bask in everlasting burn...

DampKitten
DampKitten
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AngelsOfLustAngelsOfLustabout 1 month ago

So powerful submission. Only truly submissive ones understand this power. 5 stars!

42Below42Belowabout 1 month ago

Form as function.

Ripping down the dark crevice, center justified.

Either side, the inner thighs of the page’s whiteness.

From Bed to beach. I am hungry.

ccblankccblankabout 1 month ago

Perfect, as always

Elaine_MatureElaine_Matureabout 1 month ago

'til dripping syrup soaks the sheets.

My God how do you do it? Inspired.

Paul4playPaul4playabout 1 month ago

Like the blazing sun, this poem is hot.

It is torrid!

Your submission complete and your void filled.

Lyrical, rhythmic and embracing.

An exhilarating and arousing poem!

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