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On the day that you left me...
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DampKitten
DampKitten
187 Followers

What I remember most
are your delicate
fingers

creasing the edges,
folding and turning,
twisting and shaping
the everything of
anything you
touch

into all the different
creatures of
creation

until finally and at last,
I rest warm in your
empathetic palm,

panting and thumping,
dripping with your
immaculate essence.

I am almost as beautiful
and imaginative
as you.

Then,
with your angular jaw
and your intimate lines,
you release me
like a paper sparrow.


Today
in your absence
I am fallingโ€ฆ

an unraveled leaflet,
wingless and helpless,
spinning and swirling
to the ground -

your diligent hands,
your careful expression
still folding and creasing

in your omnipotent
heaven.

DampKitten
DampKitten
187 Followers
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AnaDarklingAnaDarklingabout 1 month ago

This poem is beautiful!

JodieTodayJodieTodayabout 2 months ago

That's some deep stuff Meg...love it.

A sexy perspective and some powerful creating lover...words escape me for the moment but I doubt you suffer from that problem. Nice.

melimelissamelimelissaabout 2 months ago

This is absolutely beautiful. Your clever writing charms me

Paul4playPaul4playabout 2 months ago

An intimate poem of dependence,

Then loss;

An unfilled void.

Unmoored.

HottieOlwenHottieOlwenabout 2 months ago

Oh my dear DampKitten friend, your

Rhymes always hit the spot

I'm in awe of your creative

Genius, which really is red hot

And if I may, I would suggest more of the very same

My 'kitten' gets wet, not damp

I think that you're to blame!

๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ๐ŸŒŸ

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