All Comments on 'Bliss, A Purgatory'

by legerdemer

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerover 8 years ago

I've commented, Mer, as you know in PF&D, but, in case I missed it or wrote in language different than what I'm reflecting on now, I want to remark how nicely the near rhymes work with the lyrical "I" reflections. There's nothing forced about; just beautiful.

HoneyAdoredHoneyAdoredover 8 years ago
I do like what you have done here...

...some lovely reflection and a poem inside you poem.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

...so sad and lovely. It gently summons my tears.

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