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by 29wordsforsnow

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RiverMayaRiverMayaalmost 4 years ago
As always

Such an elegantly written discourse about a lady's "ladies."

I especially liked the allusion to roses and their ever deepening, graceful (I can only hope) curtsying as they "bloom."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

*sighs wistfully*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I LOVE this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Beautifully written, I agree with Maya. You write so elegant and lovely. Made me smile so.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Well, where are my manners: My gratitude goes to M8dOvGlaz for dropping the 55 when asked how to define 'mature' - the rest came more or less naturally. And also for being again the second pair of eyes spotting the words where my poor English found its limits.

And of course, a thousand thanks to all readers and everyone who gave feedback.

shadow_stormshadow_stormalmost 4 years ago

Always a pleasure reading your work, 29!

PiscatorPiscatorover 3 years ago

A rise by any other name? Sweet!

tazz317tazz317over 3 years ago
FROM THE HIWAY TO THE BLOOMING GARDENS OF LUST

to a lifestyle of planting to end as dust. TK U MLJ LV NV

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