All Comments on 'body double'

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 19 years ago
Sometimes

I want to be...

Brutal lines

"Tucked between mattresses

a rhyme and meter by which

to measure our worth."

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
your poem

has been mentioned in Fridays reviews

steve portersteve porterover 19 years ago
It left me satisfied

and chuckling.Thanx.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Unparalleled

There is an erotic feel tucked inbetween the mattress, and I'm sure with the lines as well.

WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
just a thought

All poems should end with "Bring on the dancing bimbos." It would really liven up those poems about gingivitis, mange, and dutch elm disease.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Bit of a kinky feel

Between mattresses.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
SMILE YOUR ON LIVE CAMERA

and dont forget 8 to the bar, TK U MLJ LV NV

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