All Comments on 'Bold and Big'

by JonMHoll92

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blkassbabeblkassbabeabout 7 years ago
Taking notice

I'm at a loss for words, which does not often happen. You've certainly made me sit up and take notice with this bold poem. good rhythm and descriptive writing. Bravo on your first submission, what a big, bold effort that is truly appreciated.

Now that you've started, I look forward to you sharing more of this budding talent.

Ashesh9Ashesh9about 7 years ago
Stare, squeeze , spank and kiss

Aaaaah to be in Bottom loving Bliss!!!!

5-ed and Faved!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Ah yes--the classy tongue in the bung hole

A wonderful location choice but your word choice, i.e. "hot sexy mama" is rather stinko but carry on, you'll make a lot of friends cleaning up

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