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AlwaysHungryover 8 years agoA quibble
Mixing the formal "you" with the familiar "thee" is somewhat disconcerting. It's like you can't decide how you really feel about her.
spoiled_bratscheover 14 years agoSeriously?
Not a single comment in all these years? Unfathomable. What a little jewel, faithful to form and subject in taut, spare lines that leave nothing out. Interesting rhyme scheme, too; Spenser-ish with a twist.
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