All Comments on 'born of a journey'

"hunger suckled strength"? (Which seems to be the sustenance on that well worn path I know too well.)

I had to look twice to see if it was really you.

: )

sparse and direct.

Some great word choices

your writing has grown by leaps and bounds.

excellent work

there are some well-chosen words here / there is a bad tense change in the third grouping, it seems to me / ~filled~ should be ~fill~, i think/

This is an excellent poem, filled with beautiful phrases. Personally I like the poem the way it is and feel "filled" sounds better than "fill." Both are good, but I don't think you should change a thing!

I think this poem would have benefited by being longer. The journey ends after some marvelous first steps. Nice work, I just wish there was more.

Metaphorically laced journey of hope

With enough promise to keep leading the reader on.