All Comments on 'Broken'

by sweet GA peaches

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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Like a sweet, sad song of longing; you can feel the void here.

kwanjiu58kwanjiu58over 16 years ago
Outstanding

Once again, this talented poet takes us to a higher level and shows us a zen-like quality of her writing to which we all should aspire. Kudos to you for showing us the true combination of words and emotions. You have weaved them together into a symphony of emotions.

LadyLovesBlueLadyLovesBlueover 16 years ago
Lovely piece

Well written, mournful, bittersweet.. I look forward to reading more of your work.

LLB

bluerainsbluerainsover 16 years ago
this one

drips of rain and droplets of heart blinks....luvs ...from blue

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 16 years ago
^

You're nothing but a heart bleeding poetry? As if there is something wrong with that. I keep trying to be a heart, bleeding poetry and I continue to fail, you on the other hand make it look easy.

DuPainDuPainabout 16 years ago
Dream

Dream my love, it is the best of the human spirit!

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