All Comments on 'broken'

stanza is perhaps the best one

Great rhythm and word placement.

You are getting better fawnie

don't stop

; )

Thank you

...are indeed getting better, and at a rapid rate! Very nice stuff...great topic and strong and concise phrasing.

I loved the strength of your phrases.

Now all I have to do is learn how too ;-)

Well chosen words as

A spirited horse is captured

Subdued and broken and finally bridled.