All Comments on 'Brown Eyes'

by Pandoras Desire

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MagnetronMagnetronalmost 10 years ago

Delightful and playful. Smooth flow from start to finish. Booyah it gets the job done without being clinical or vulgar.

Pandoras DesirePandoras Desirealmost 10 years agoAuthor
Wow!

Thanks for your lovely comment!

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Lovely

- but cry that it's over . . . Just how I felt. Lovely verse capturing loving moments.

Pandoras DesirePandoras Desireover 9 years agoAuthor
wow,

thanks again! I always have someone in mind when I write these poems. "24" and "Brown Eyes" are the same person. I do have some that aren't erotic, but that would defeat the purpose of this website.

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