by tungtied2u
A playful little snicker. The kind of snicker that says I think I saw that same canyon, that same sun.
A snicker is a nice thing in the morning. Thanks.
The rewrite makes soooo much more sense. The meaning of the final line didn't even hit my dirty mind before. This is brilliant, fun ride.
I do not seee "she" as a mistake in this poem. Its very sexy, lotta fun, enjoyed :)
Hot little tickling, giggle from this read. The ending was fab!
Thanks for sharing!
Dana