All Comments on 'Burn Baby Burn'

the sun can tan your flesh so rare. TK U MLJ LV NV

this poem is almost as hot as tabasco sauce...haha. Well done.

Mmmmmmmmmmmm good.

So lead me to 'em,

these high maintenance

sun block buyers;

I volunteer to maintain 'em

And washing down edible sun block

with chardonnay; topped off with a

chocolate chip laced delight, I can see -

I'll need fresh groceries every day...........

Weeee! This was great! Psst...this is in the non-erotic category.

layer tenderly

tits and toes

apply generously

lips and nose <smiles>

Your wonderful poems always make me lusty. This is a gem!

what a sexy poem, Sandspike!! wow, I need something to cool me down now, ohh, you have me aching for the beach, :P loves your poem ;)

Bottle red heads have more fun.... honey anyone lol...

Du~

Who the hell needs mechanical toys when you tell us how to have so much fun in the peel.... I really enjoyed this write.. made me hungry and running to the market!

Du~

Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poem thread at the poetry board.