All Comments on 'BusyBodies, always around'

This is hot-

slowly subsiding to a

silent hiss,

Done again and well done

By Him.

Alliteration is ssso sssexy.

a wonderful use of alliteration and assonance throughout makes this one sound as good as it reads.

"Seminal ladies sitting

in semi-circles"

Damn how I wish I said that. This is a poem to read aloud and to read loudly. Very good.

jim : )

It's different than your usual style. I like your usual style but I like this too--a lot.

Ebb and flow of alliteration

In a rather hot piece for something not erotic.

The way this piece ends, I suspect it should be classed as erotic.

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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