All Comments on 'But it Never Lasts'

This is so well crafted, both in terms of its beautiful imagery and the feeling that drips from every line. Would like to give you a 10...

I've mentioned your poem in today's new poem reviews as well. Good work and thanks for the read!

you are so generous with your time and praise, thank you vampiredust.

Willows_tears

ps oh my goodness, the passcode is my bra size! 34 CD

nice write (~_~) thanks for the read

Beautiful imagery of all it means to love.

Five.