All Comments on 'by moonlight in the afterlife'

by vrosej10

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellabout 13 years ago
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love this and am tempted to say hang on in there but I won't! love the visual of the ghostly you hanging onto a chimney pot!

AngelineAngelineabout 13 years ago
A wraith of a poem

that manages to be weighty and weightless at once. You could wring meaning from a stone! And once again the title puts the whole poem in perspective. A fine five of a poem, Vee. :-)

buttersbuttersabout 13 years ago
that last line

is pure gold, V. wonderful expression

clinging to cling, possibly...

was this another dream-inspired write, v?

Maria2394Maria2394about 13 years ago
beautiful

I like the visuals you give. The title itself is poetic.

twelveoonetwelveooneabout 13 years ago
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Mary Poppins died? Law of unintended consequences. 100

sandybsandybabout 13 years ago

This stays with you after reading. Nicely done.

Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years ago
I had to read everything else

and let this one percolate. For some reason it didn't strike me at first, but then I realized I wasn't catching meaning. Maybe reading the title would have been a good idea (roll eyes espie). As simple verse with simple meaning, good--not brides and horses (LOL), but good.

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