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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 10 years ago

Sweet and happy love. Old and deep or new and fresh, Lesse?

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthor

new as yesterday, old as eternity...

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
Nice....

....sentiment. You could end on the fifth line making it tighter and - um - sweeter. Five

LesseloovesPeterLesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the suggestion, Tristesse, I like that!

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