All Comments on 'Carbon'

by Sabina_Tolchovsky

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Sweet

aww the forgotten love.

Sweet an heartbreaking~

Nice flow, an great metaphoric usage.

Keep'm comin.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
mention

mentioned in reviews

My Erotic TailMy Erotic Tailabout 19 years ago
excellent

I love the way you wove nature, emotions, passion and poetry in this write, a true master of the pen <grin>

duckiesmutduckiesmutabout 19 years ago
*

"I will love you

the way fire loves carbon"

That has been floating around in my head all afternoon. Thank you. :)

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 19 years ago
2 double shots.....

of fire water coming right up. cheers!!! why not......it's a hell of a great piece....nicely done sabina.......don

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Beautiful...

expression of unconditional love.

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 15 years ago
Very strong

and packs a punch in just a few words. Thanks.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ONE'S FEELINGS OUT SHINE THE OTHER

and will outlast forever, TK U MLJ LV NV

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