by jd4george
borne thru the centuries and remembered, TK U MLJ LV NV
Just joining in on the chorus to say that this is an excellent poece of poetry. Strong, complete, instant and perfectly paced.
what a great poem! I loved the "chapter" structure, which evokes a scriptural style.
I just do not know what to say. This is haunting and so powerful, this part struck me especially, it resonated-
Blind screams echo back
echo back to me
echo back
"I have learned fear."
havent we all...
The Roman numeral suggestion is a good'un! Thanks 1201!
Passion played
so well
I like the organization of this.
I have to say it was tough to pick, maybe 2 and 6, as what was best.
The only thing I would change here is I
and II and III...have you considered Roman numerals for this?