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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ON DEATHS BEDi

is not careless, only life. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Becoming life's shooting star, spreading your self out amongst the firmament.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
best poem

of the day in my opinion. Your imagery is great, esp in the first stanza:

'Late night, spiders whisper "Don't start, no,

don't dream. Not tonight."

They are wise, widows aware that

stardust is just soul ashes.'

This is simply awesome

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