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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
MY BUCKET HAS A HOLE IN IT

nothing it contains is worth saving, TK U MLJ LV NV

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 15 years ago
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Some holes can't be filled. Very nicely done.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 16 years ago
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An undertone of bitterness pervades — just taking care of a friend...

bogusbrigbogusbrigabout 16 years ago
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I know the voice and I wonder if it is, a good poem though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Cavity

Was mentioned in the New Poems Reviews thread in the PF & D forum.

AngelineAngelineabout 16 years ago
Good stuff!

Even if it is about one of my least favorite experiences. I'd like to see more sharp, painful word choices to make the language live up to the theme. Great read though. :-)

champagne1982champagne1982about 16 years ago
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Such a painful metaphor! Dentistry anyone? Thanks for this poem.

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