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by HarryHill
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Angelineabout 11 years agoThis is very good
the writing flows and I like "cornfusion" and the way history is built into the narrative of the poem. I don't agree with the sentiment, but when you've lived (as I once did) with an alcoholic who damn near killed himself and hurt everyone around him, you tend to focus on the other side of the picture. But that's me. You've written good poetry here. 5ed.
HarryHillabout 11 years agoAuthorThis is not about alcohol
but I can see why you would think that.
Thank you A9, did you see the hidden part?
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