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This is a refined, yet emotionally palpable, expression of a seemingly profound grief; the commingling of nature with emotion is very "Hardyesque", the words painfully precise (either is not easy, even for a skilled and experienced writer/poet). Form and content - how rare to read it as one with a heart and mind (the writer's *and* the reader's). Have a tender kiss wherever you'd receive it, Gauche. - Perdita

had a lot to say about your poem.

I'll just say that I love it.

What they said...

Loved it!!!!!

Anger & rage, then grief borne through all the years; deeply moving piece.

Anger & rage, then grief borne through all the years; deeply moving piece.

to describe lonliness, TK U MLJ LV NV