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by Curiouswife

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Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years ago
cuddle me till home

is missing a pronoun or something.

"Steal me away among apples/

allow me to play alone/

then swaddle me in green leaves" is the good part of your poem. The rest is inelegant.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
ME, MYSELF AND I

is still only 1 person, TK U MLJ LV NV

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