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by SinnamonStick

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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I liked the abrupt feel of the mocha splashing, very well done...keep writing. Sabina

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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Welcome to Lit

With this coffee shop write;

So tell us ~

Does she or doesn't she?

TheRainManTheRainManover 18 years ago
Nice touch throughout.

I like the subtle language, how you leave much unsaid, yet it is there, for the reader to know. Please post more of your work. This was a very interesting and well-handled piece.

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