All Comments on 'Christmas Dawn'

"Christmas Dawn" stunned me with the visions you created in my mind. This very erotic stringing together of words should be but a beginning of your writing, whether it be erotic poetry or stories. It is beautiful. I hope you will continue writing.

Hot stuff, and highly erotic! Inter-family breeding no less!

It was the red haired girl friend who was the pregnant one by her son. They shared his affection.

My intention was to represent two parellel images The second verse intended to image the first verses landscape scene.

The second part has some Sam Shepard's rhythms... Great !

I adore how Universal you make me feel.

I would really love to somehow interview you as a subject for an up and coming story of mine.

Please consider this.

Respectfully

Peterswiftt