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by Joseki Ko

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tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
SIMPLIFYING A STATEMENT

so all can apprehend. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
5-7-6?

Haiku is 5-7-5, yours is 5-7-6

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
WAITING TO BE OPENED

on the morn. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Again, here's another piece that would best be described as zappai (same structure as haiku though).

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
The Spirit.

This Haiku depicts the celebration of life. The Christmas Tree illustration lights the way to better understanding.

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