by Willow Rain
sweet. I love the flow here and your casual intent to draw us out with the mute mummbles about teasing our/his cerrbrum. Sexy my friend, sneaky sexy, lol. Nice, silzzle in this pen ~~
Sometimes I think that well written written poetry is a beauty that can't be quantified until you're face to face with it, looking and knowing; feeling the perfect satisfaction of the right words woven together in the right ways. And you've done that here. Nothing is wasted in this poem. Truly excellent.
Bad girl ! I love your word play,
and the scene you paint with your
poetic brush. I love the waiting, and
taunting.......and the little girl who
later admits, she is a bad girl.
That was a bad piece, of fine writing !
sGp
though longer than the average poem here. A whole story packed into such well chosen words.
This is so erotic with none of the graphic description that is often offered. Well done!
Tess
What is this??? More like the horn of plenty of top notch erotica than a single poem. If you ask me, poems like this should be the model of a poetry section in an erotic web site. <P>
YOU -mute? I think not and when you talk, I for sure will listen.
Goodness someone turned the heating up a few notches ... I may have to strip ...
Underyourspell masquerading as anonymous!