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by sophia jane

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logophilelogophilealmost 19 years ago
Well done

Nicely told tale of a spiritual, as well as physical, claiming.

Jennifer CJennifer Calmost 19 years ago
Excellent piece

A well written poem of

putting claim to the one

you love. Lovely work

really well done!

Thanks.

~ Jenn

sacksackalmost 19 years ago
Very believable....

Nothing like a good ol' honest poem such as this. Very heartfelt!

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Soulmates

Very nice Sophia Jane. The language was simple but very evocative.

TY, BD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Belong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

To yourself. We fought this idea thru in the 70's. Love, Follow, adore, allow humility if that liberates extra pleasure; but keep in touch with and within your own head. As a male I cringe at some comments and even the male authorships here, and THIS IS THE BEST. The small c's and earth's MAINLY non worshipers came to their senses in the main, the cap C's have confession, the J's continually misread their own script... unless your name is Golda, the B's in the main were so far ahead of the game, the H's brought about an unbeaten sex manual, the minors a mix and mainly for the insanely devoted, the M's oppressed for so long are 300-400 years behind in so many ways. We have to hope A opens a few key eyes, minds, and hearts. If we cannot respect the female sex how can the female sex respect sex??? But that may be what the R weirdos want. If this does not make sense move on with a copy in the corner of your screen.. Until it clicks. RESPECT is too big a global issue to be a political party. And Respect cannot begin until equal rights and social freedoms are the global norm. Some Oppression of sexual frredom and activity, within safe consenting age barriers, or onness, is a side facet. And the facet is bigger than the largest human in some places.

And if ur feeling like a big headed western liberal look at the history of women's and ethnic enfranchise. And Irish. Recent enough??

NB I have a life-time of watching risque movies and porn and enjoyed mags and still enjoy the stories here; that involve real life humans!!

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