All Comments on 'Clean Up on Aisle 7'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Sexy.

The indulgence of gluttony to satiate primal cravings is hot. And for the record, I would totally let you eat a greeezy BBQ flavor potato chip off my nipple. Twice. ;)

TransverseTransverseover 14 years ago
SO cool.

I like it; it's funny and lighthearted, but totally deep and poetic at the same time. I can't believe I'm saying this about a poem, but I love your meaningful simplicity.

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

No soy products for me. Great title, great poem, aisle 7 is where its at.

PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersover 14 years ago
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vrosej10vrosej10almost 15 years ago
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So true. That's a junk food binge I can get with. An excellent poem.See my poem My Favourite Sundae for discussion of said binge.

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I'm green. Like a lush forest. I love hiking, biking, rain, interesting religious ideas, big trees, books, art, design, poetry, spicy food, liberal politics, quirky movies. And sex. I like that, too. Hobbies: Helping babygirl learn important things.