Cloak you in my Fury

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When the emotional fortress disallows love
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Hey baby
let me cloak you
in my fury
'til your body moves no more

Splice you into my most sinister
bad black dreams
Stomp on your anger
with steel toes

Torch your indecision
swipe away its ash
with the glower in my mind

Hey lover
can I tongue beads of sweat from your brow

Pummel your unexpected
swell and thrust
with the clench and wrap of my thighs

Bite away bitter terms of endearment
that spill from your lips
Unwanted
Futile

Let me
Be
your violence
your rage
your bitter sweat
your domination
your unanswered prayer

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VoboyVoboyover 1 year ago

It's like I'm there. Very well-written.

MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 1 year ago

Exquisite. When the emotional cannot, but the body can. A love no less pure. No less real. Physically joined with such abandon that skin no longer separates two now united in one need.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunalmost 2 years ago

So powerful, and so full of emotion. You are a very gifted writer.

Paul4playPaul4playalmost 2 years ago

Wow!

Impactful imagery of fury and force; domination.

Yet, the narrator is asking permission….

“Let me”, “Can I”….

A nuanced power play in all the gory brutality and beauty of lusty desire!

elizalooelizalooalmost 2 years ago

Another fabulous contribution that makes me pause and reread over and over. Thank you!

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