All Comments on 'close'

I usually am not too crazy about whatever this is called, the squishing together and breaking apart of words and lines, but this works it works

good for you to have that instinct-- welcome to lit, I have enjoyed your poems so far! stick around, I think I can learn a lot from your work.

~I dont use the thermometer~

of sex and tension packed into this tight little work.

Great job

i love the tightness of the words, in the shape of a woman's bosom. one can feel the words flow right down her breast.