All Comments on 'CMLseries~ Deep, Valentino'

Excellent to even a jaded palate.

this left me thirsty...:-) Sabina

your poem has been mentioned in today's reviews

Excellent tantalizing addition to your marvelous and very crafty series. an Erotic icon with lure of the word series, anticipation creeps in, which way will this erotic write travel and make us crave ...more!

I liked your use of all the wines and the way you wrap the toast up so neatly with the drinking terms. A real shirt ripper!

Tess

in the *vixxon vapors* that could make a sinus congestion disappear.

Sultry; this claret velvet night

as drunken fog of lust

lies low and cognac thick

His virile gait enters her

succulent sweet grape

to cellars' depths;

staggering strides sensuous;

deep

celestial deep

as if descent was His only Ascension

deep, Valentino...

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heck.....this could even make bi-polar disorder very erotic too. obviously this piece has fingernails.....it's digging into my back. an absolutely beautiful piece. It may dedicated to romance, but it sure can help the hopeless.

See, MISTRESS Vixxx told me that this would be the best installment in the Crave Maker Series. Of course, I had the inside scoop- that She's sick with pneumonia, coughing all the time, unable to sleep well... of course this couldn't be as good as the other ones, right?

Wrong. MISTRESS Vixxx tops Herself, once again. I think She's magic. Or maybe blessed. Or maybe She's just the Michael Jordan or Elvis or Mozart of literature. I don't know. She sure can write, though.

=>craaaaayon

Your words are like beautiful music in the night, the way you tie the wine into the romance... lovely.

Drunk on wine and drunk on romance. Best read with a fine vintage. A wonderfully entertaining read.

b'brig

you are at your best with a poem that is sensual, sexual, and alive with every little trembling muscle of overwhelming climax as the beautiful imagery captivates the mind, opens the imagination, and keeps the heart pounding.

The hardest part for me is trying to find different ways of saying the same thing every time, except to say where each is unique, but they are all at a level that few can reach... deserving of classical status.

But don't let it go to your head ; P

Especially liked that little touch with the move from cellars' depths, then celestial deep, and then, "He slips deeper into her heavens;" This surely is vintage Vixxx

Delicious! ~Imp