All Comments on 'cobwebs on sandspikes'

This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.

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Nicely written

Attic-bound

Journey of discovery.

Your poems make me smile.

The first line or two is not very exciting. Actually, the first line is a bit weak.

The rest is quite nice.

These lines are fantastic:

fading reality into cool pastels

to be dried upon the summer sand

throughout this piece.....i've got to pull out my favorite spot here:

holding page after page

handwritten poetry

tales of bars, beaches, and love

products of a shallow mind

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nice work......don

Loved the title,

a really good piece,

thanks.

~ J

just a beautiful poem sandspike, and to leave yourself smiling, in all the pictures, what a wonderful gift. Maybe you should write this out, in your own hand and leave it with a photo of you smiling, :)

to these images ..really nice sunny pen...blue

Like the Mona Lisa...

I wonder if she had poetry hiding up her skirt?

Would Leonardo have known?